2016一二模 情景作文

2016一二模 情景作文（共3篇）

2016一二模 情景作文 篇1

2016年西城二模情景作文范文荟萃

第二节（20分）

假设你是红星中学的学生李华。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，用英文写一篇周记，Dad proposed to fly kites.Pulling the kite lines behind me, running freely on the grass and feeling the mild wind kissing my face, I felt extremely delighted.Mom sat on the grass, with a huge smile on the face;she clapped and cheered for Father and me.As the evening drew near, we sat together on the grass, waiting to admire the sunset.记述上周日你和父母一起骑车郊游的过程。

注意：词数不少于60。提示词: 郊区 the suburbs

一、One possible version:

Last Sunday, my parents and I went to the suburbs of Beijing and had a great time together.To make it a green journey, we all agreed to cycle there.With everything ready, we set out.The warm sunshine and the fresh air put us all in a good mood.Upon arrival, we got down to our preparation.Dad and I worked together to put up the tent, while Mum set out her homemade food.Everyone was enjoying the pleasant and relaxed family atmosphere in the open air.After the meal, we couldn’t wait to fly kites.Running and laughing, we watched our kites of different shapes dancing high in the sky.Mum couldn’t help cheering for us.What fun it was!

Dusk fell before we realized it.Seated together before leaving, we quietly watched the golden sunset, wishing to have more weekends like today.二、学生优秀习作(19分)Last Sunday, I, together with my parents, rode a bike to the suburbs and enjoyed ourselves, which turned out to be rewarding and unforgettable.Early in the morning, with bags well-packed, we rode alongside the path in the hills.Breathing the fresh air, bathed in the sunlight, we drowned ourselves in the natural beauty.Before long, we arrived at the camping spot.After taking some pictures of the scenery, Father and I got down to putting up the tent, while Mom was fully occupied with preparations for the lunch with the food we brought.With the noon sun shining, sweat streamed down our cheeks and made our T-shirts wet.With our joint effort, the tent was put up and the meal was delicious to enjoy.After lunch, 1 / 2

Seeing the red sun sink slowly into the horizon, a peaceful and happy smile spread over our faces.How I wish I could freeze this moment!

It was through this experience that I exercised myself by biking and enjoyed precious moments with my parents.Though the day we spent was short, the memory I cherished will last long in my mind.评语：覆盖所有要点，细节补充合理生动，句式丰富，用词准确，描写地道，体现了非常强的语言运用能力。有个别的错误但不影响理解。

（19分）

It was a peaceful sunny day when my parents and I went for a cycling tour in the suburbs.With few people around, the forest was as if welcoming us specially with its natural beauty, embracing us with the cool breeze.Equipped with all necessities in backpacks and totally amazed by the greenness, we cycled further into the forest, ready to discover more hidden beauties.Soon appeared a piece of clearing behind the trees, and we merrily stopped to get ready for a picnic.Dad and I busied ourselves with setting up the tent, while Mom was occupied in the preparation, spreading out the cloth and cutting food.With everything done, we sat down close to each other to enjoy Mom’s home-made dishes, satisfying both our minds and stomachs.With a full stomach, Dad suggested we fly our kites, for the wind was picking up, which I instantly agreed.So strings in hands and kites flying against the blue sky, Dad and I raced against each other, just like when I was a kid.Upon seeing this, Mom couldn’t help but applaud for us, her face lighting up with excitement.How happy time fled!Noticing the sun setting, we sat side by side on the grass to admire the breathtaking view.Little by little, the sun went down as I felt a sense of contentment and joy enveloping the three of us.Suddenly Mom told us she felt so lucky to have us around her.Words failed me at that moment.I came to realized that family was where everyone is concerned with each other, where love always resides.评语：全文涵盖所有内容及要点，细节补充合理生动。并且能够通过文章传达合理的情感，打动读者，而不仅仅是叙述事实。语言运用能力强，词语句式准确多样。上下文内容连贯，结构严谨紧凑。体现很强的语言素养和写作能力。

(18分)

Last Sunday, I went camping with my parents.That was an unforgettable experience, which will be rooted in my memory.Setting off early in the morning, each of us rode a bike with bags on our backs.smelling the fragrance of the grass, hearing the singing of the stream, we were totally immersed in the nature.As we rode on, the sunlight flowed through the clouds, and we could feel the warmth of it.So we stopped to put up our tent.My father and I chose a spot to set the tent, while my mother was busy preparing for a picnic.She cut some bread and took out some fruits carefully ,as if she were making a feast.Then, after the picnic, my father and I went to fly the kites.Running besides my father, I could clearly feel my heart floating in the air as the kites going up and down.Everything was quiet and time was frozen at the moment, except for the applause.It was my mother, who was clapping her hands for us.At last, we seated ourselves near a lake and witnessed the glorious sunset.I was shocked to see the whole lake colored by the sunlight, shinning smoothly.Seeing the incredible scenery, I even recited some poems at the end of our camping.It was the charm of the nature that made our day!评语:文章覆盖了所有内容要点，细节补充合理，句式多样，措辞准确自然，虽有个别错误，但为尽可能表达丰富所致，体现了较强的语言运用能力，段落清晰，内容连贯，书写工整，完全完成了试题规定的任务。

(18分)Last Sunday, my parents and I paid a riding visit to the suburbs.It was a wonderful day, with sun shining on the sky and light breeze.With everything prepared in our bags, we started the journey.We rode for half an hour when we were delighted to find that the surroundings had gradually changed from tall buildings into mountains and trees.Riding along the road, we were all absorbed in the breathtaking scenery and felt very relaxed.When it was already noon and we all felt a little tired, we decided to have a rest.We found a grass land under the trees and put up our tent in the shade.It took much effort when my dad and I were trying to put up the tent.In the meanwhile, my mom prepared the lunch for us such as sausages, bread and some fruits, which turned out to be a simple but pleasant meal.After having lunch, my mom took out the kites from her bag and suggested that we fly the kite.Both my dad and I took a kite and ran across the grass field to make it fly higher.Seeing we succeed in flying kites, my mom couldn’t help cheering for us.Time flies.Without our notice, the sun was slowly going down.Sitting down on the ground together, we just watched the sunset quietly and enjoyed this moment of peace.I couldn’t move my eyes from the splendid and beautiful sky and sunlight.What a meaningful day，for I not only enjoyed the scenery but also spent a wonderful day with my parents.评语：文章覆盖了所有内容要点，细节补充合理，句式多样，语言流畅自然，不乏生动的描写，体现了较强的语言运用能力，分段合理，内容连贯，完全达到了写作目的。

（18分）

Last Sunday, my parents and I went cycling in the suburbs.Eager to take a fresh breath in nature, we hit the road early in the morning.Feeling free and excited, I took the lead while my 2 / 2

parents were following behind.The sunshine was warm and the scenery alongside was

beautiful.Though burdened with heavy backpacks and tired for riding such a long way, I still felt as light as a feather.Finally we stopped on a small hill and settled down.It was already in the afternoon.All the bags unpacked, my father and I were busy putting up the tent, while my mother was

preparing for our picnic.She put the blanket on the ground and took out the food in the basket.Then work was soon all done and we enjoyed a delicious lunch.It was really enjoyable to run around freely in the nature, especially when a kite was in hand.My father and I flew the kites energetically as if we were little children.My mother was a little tired, so she just sat there and clapped for our joy.After a thorough relaxation on the hill, we decided to appreciate the sunset together by the huge lake.Watching the sun disappearing gradually below the horizon, I could sense happiness in our hearts.I cherished all the little happy moments that day, as they not only brought us closer to nature but also brought all of our family members even closer, which was most valuable.评语：语言准确，句式丰富，描写生动。很好地完成了写做任务。

（18分）

Last Sunday, my family decided to put into practice the outing we had long been preparing for.It was a fine day, with the vast fields bathing in mild morning light, promising a most

wonderful journey ahead of us.Packed with some necessities, we rode up the hill, enjoying the fresh breeze while in search of the best spot to settle down for a picnic.It wasn’t long before we reached our final decision for the picnic spot.Pulling up by the path, I got engaged in setting up the tent with Dad while Mom concentrated on setting snacks prepared for lunch on the carpet spread on the lawn.It was easy at first, yet the hardship of work got lost in the laughter of joy.Full and relaxed after lunch, Dad and I could well fell the gust of gentle breeze luring us to try out our newly-bought kites.What a pity it would be if we wasted such a fine afternoon not going kiting!So we took out our kites and flew them up and down the hill, chasing and laughing, while Mom watched us from aside, cheering for us and taking great delight in the joy.At the end of the day came the sunset.The harmony and peace of the scenery was in no way contradictory to our liveliness in the afternoon.On the lawn we sat, gathering our memories of daytime and enjoying the last bit of sunshine.It was surely a most

unforgettable outing together.（I think I’ll always remember that day in the suburbs with my parents.It has equipped me with a peaceful mind and that’s the best way to refresh one’s body and mind.）

评语：文章覆盖了所有内容要点，细节补充合理。语言句式准确多样流畅，体现了很强的语言运用能力。上下文连接意识到位，内容连贯，书写工整，完全达到了预期写作目的。

2016一二模 情景作文 篇2

1.现在人们已经习惯于将坏天气与空气污染联想到一起。（associate)Nowadays,people are accustomed to associating bad weather with air pollution.2.汤姆错过了那场公众评价很高的电影，并非买不到电影票，而是因为交通堵塞。(available)Tom missed the movie(that)the public spoke highly of not because the movie ticket were available but because he met with/came across the traffic jam.3.上海迪斯尼乐园肯定会成为一个值得多次游览的旅游景点（worth)Shanghai Disneyland is sure to become a place of interest/a scenic spot/a tourist attraction/destination(that is)worth visiting many times.4.学生们难得有机会目睹那位著名的诺贝尔文学奖获得者(Seldom)Seldom do students have a chance to see the famous winner of the Nobel Prize for literature.5.正是因为社会过份注重外表，不少年轻人改变了他们原有的饮食习惯(It)Lt is because society puts too much emphasis on appearance that many young people have changed their original eating habits.【闵行二模】

1.在我们学校，教师和学生都可以免费上网。（access)In our school,the teachers and students have free access to the Internet.2.道路拓宽后，这里的交通有望得到极大的改善。（expect)The traffic is expected to be improved greatly after the road is widened.3.你方便的话，放学后请帮我把上周借的书还到图书馆去。(convenient）If it is convenient to you,please return the books which were borrowed last week to the library after school.4.为了免受交通拥挤之苦，越来越多的市民搬到了市郊，享受渴望已久的宁静生活。（free）

To be free from heavy traffic,more and more citizens move to the suburbs，enjoying a peaceful life they have been eager for a long time.5.中外游客们不仅领略了古城的美景，也对当地的传统文化和悠久历史有了一个大致的了解(Not only)Not only did the visitors from home and aboard appreciate the beauty of the ancient city,but also have a rough idea of the local traditional culture and the long history.【黄浦二模】

1.在假期学生也能使用图书馆。（access）

Students have access to the library during the vacation too.2.新政策会给我们带来好处还是危害还得拭目以待。（remain）Whether the new policy will do us harm or good remains to be seen.3.让没有受过专业培训的人操作机器是不负责任的行为。（who）It is irresponsible to allow someone who hasn’t received professional training to operate the machine.4.如果我们换个角度来看问题也许能找到切实可行的解决问题。（If)If we view the problem from a different angle,we might be able to find a practical solution.5.他有着如此坚强的意志，定会不遗余力，力争提前完成任务。（such...that)He has such a strong will that he is sure to spare no effort/make every effort and try to finish the task in advance.【徐汇,金山，松江二模】

1.这首脍炙人口的歌曲改编自一首古老的民歌。（adapt)The popular song is adapted from an old folk song.2.图书馆里借不到这本参考书，所以我只能去附近书店买。（available)The reference book was not available in the library,so l had to buy one at the bookstore nearby.3.要想发展科学，必须营造一种鼓励创新的环境，要允许自由探索，提倡学术争鸣。（advocate)To develop science,we must create an environment that encourages innovation,and we must allow free exploration and advocate academic debate.4.飞机起飞前，乘务员的责任之一就是确保所有乘客都系好安全带。（ensure)Before the plane takes off,one of the flight attendant s duties is to ensure that all the passengers have fastened their safety belts.5.学校董事会没有批准这一提案，也没有做出任何解释。（nor)The school board did not approve the proposal,nor did they make any explanation/give the reason for doing so.【崇明二模】

2016一二模 情景作文 篇3

期末评价方案

克拉玛依市第十四小学

2015年12月

克拉玛依市第十四小学

2015-2016学年第一学期二年级英语期末评价方案

一、评价方式变革的目的和意义

对学生进行学习评价是英语教学过程中的一个重要环节，是评价学生在学习过程中使用所学知识进行学习活动的情况。它对教与学的活动有着巨大的导向作用。

一、二年级学生处于小学低段，他们对英语学习还充满着兴趣和乐趣，因此，小学阶段一、二年级学生的评价方式应摒弃以往以书写、考试为主的评价模式，切实从学科的教学特点和目的出发，从学生的兴趣和能力出发、从一切为了学生的健康发展出发，采用灵活多样的评价手段和方法，保护和发展小学低段学生的学习兴趣。

二、评价的原则

由于我校二年级的班级均为混合编班班级，每个班都有一定的少数民族学生。他们活泼、热情，但是年纪幼小，学习时间尚短，从自己的母语过度到汉语学习本身已有不小难度，英语学习对他们来说就成了第三语言。基于此学情，教师在进行评价是应遵循一下原则：

1.激励性原则。教师要鼓励学生参与到测试活动中，无论是歌曲演唱还是口语问答都应顺应老师鼓励、学生自愿的原则，保护好学生的学习兴趣。

2.参与性原则。教师为主导，学生是学习和评价的主体，创设宽松愉悦的成长环境，鼓励学生积极主动地参与各种活动，形成对学科的热爱、对班级的热爱、对校园生活的热爱。

3.活动性评价原则：以接近课堂教学活动的听、做、说、唱、玩、演、等形式进行评价，让学生在轻松的氛围中运用所学知识，体验学习的乐趣。

三、评价小组

评价小组成员：魏利娜、王娟

四、评价时间和地点

评价活动利用学生正常上课时间，在班里进行。

五、评价内容及评分标准

（一）、评价内容 1、26个字母的认读

测试内容：认读 英文26个字母

测试方法：教师随机抽取字母，学生认读字母。

2、歌曲表演

测试内容：《趣趣英语》第三册所学内容

测试方法：两位或三位学生合作演唱两首《趣趣英语第三册》里的歌曲歌谣。

3、口语交际

测试内容：《趣趣英语》第三册所学相关内容和日常口语交际 a.What’s your name? b.Good morning /afternoon/evening, xxx.c.How do you go to school? d.What do you like ? e.What time do you go to school? f.What’s your favorite color? 测试方法

教师随机提问3个问题，学生回答。评分标准 优秀：字母认读流利，发音准确。乐于演唱，歌曲演唱正确、流利，动作优美。回答问题口齿清晰，声音洪亮，回答正确。

良好：能正确认读字母，发音准确。乐于演唱，歌曲演唱基本正确，伴有动作。回答问题基本正确。

及格：能基本认读26个字母。能在同学的带领下合作演唱，伴有动作。能在老师的提示下回答问题。

待及格：不能正确认读字母。不能在其他学生的配合下演唱歌曲歌谣。在老师的提示下不能回答老师的问题。

六、评价准备工作

《趣趣英语第三册》教材、光碟、字母卡片

七、评价过程描述

1.期末评价活动利用上课时间进行，学生2-3人自由组合，在评价时，注意观察学生表现，并给予适当的鼓励和评价。

2.引导学生能做出积极的表现，当学生觉得自己表现不够理想时，教师应允许学生再次进行考评。

3.在评价时，要遵循形成性评价和终结性评价相结合的方式，做到以评促学，使评价成为鼓励学生努力学习的动力。

八、其它事宜

1.关注少数民族学生的理解程度、参与热情和执行能力。要耐心、细致地在测试前给予他们讲解和帮助。