三必经步骤：大学英语四级考试作文高分技巧

三必经步骤：大学英语四级考试作文高分技巧（共3篇）

三必经步骤：大学英语四级考试作文高分技巧 篇1

三必经步骤：大学英语四级考试作文高分技巧

时间： 2005年11月30日 08:17作者：来源：竟学网

大学四级考试写作的评分依据是：文章切切题，条理清楚，语言准确和字数符合要求。所谓切题就是看你写的作文跑不跑题。所谓条理是每一段的议论的正反清楚，描述的时间正确。语言准确要求作文的语法词汇使用正确，符合英语表达习惯。四级作文的字数要求不少于100字。针对四级考试的作文要求我们提出十二句作文法，这里所说的十二句作文法不仅包括一般英文写作的方法而且包括一套行之有效的写作方法。它的具体内容有以下几点。

一、审题

我们拿到作文后第一件要做的事就是审题。审题的作用在于使你写作不跑题（如果跑题，条理和语言再好，也得不到及格分，甚至0分。）那么审题要审什么呢？

1．体裁（议论文，说明文，描述文）

审题就是要审作文的题材和体裁。因为什么样的体裁就会用什么样的题材去写。那么体裁包括那些呢？它包括议论文，说明文和描述

文。从近些年看，四级作文不是单一的体裁，而是几种体裁的杂合体。例如：

Directions: For this part ,your are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Trying to Be A Good University Student.You should write at least 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below :

做合格大学生的必要性

做合格大学生的必备条件（可以从德智体方面谈）

我计划这样做

很多人说这种类型的作文是议论文。这是片面的，因为，第一段要求写“...必要性”，这说明本段体裁是议论文；第二段要求写“...必备条件”，这说明本段要求写说明文；儿地三段要求写“...这样做”，这说明本段要求写描述文。所以在大多数情形下，四级作文是三种体裁的杂合体。

2．根据不同体裁确定写作方法

我们审题的目的就是根据不同体裁确定不同的写作方法。通过审题，我们可以看出四级作文大都是三段式。如上例第一段为议论体，第二段为说明体，地三段为描述体。而各种文体又不同的写作方式：

议论文；要有论点和论据，而且往往从正反两方面来论述。例如上面第一段的思路是：做合格大学生，会怎么样（这是从正面论述）；不能做合格的大学生，会怎么样（从反面论述）；所以我们要做合格的大学生（结伦）。

说明文：可以从几方面或几条来说明一个问题，就上作文而言，可以从方面（德智体）来说明合格大学生的必要性。

描述文：一“人”为中心描述一个“做”的过程。与上两段相比，本段的主语多为人称代词，他要与第二段相互应进行描述。

二、确定主题句

通过审题，我们知道该如何确定正确的写作思路。下边我们就谈如何些。第一部就是要写主题句。主题句是确保不跑题的前提，只有不跑题才有可得及格分。写主题句嘴保险的方法就是把中文提纲的各句译成英语。例如上述三段主题句分别为：

It is very necessary to be a good university student.（议

论体的主题句）

There are several respects of necessities to be a good university student.（说明体的主题句）

What I will do in the future is the following.(描述体主题句)

如果要求句是英语就可以把它变成主题句，例如这样一篇作文：

Good Health

Importance of good health

Ways to keep fit

My own practice

这样的作文的要求句就可以扩充成主题句。扩充后三段的主题句分别为：

It is very important to have good health.（将名词 importance变成形容词important）

There are four ways to keep fit for me.（用 there be 句

型）

My own practices are the following.（采用原词）

三、确保文章条理清楚

保证不跑提示写作当中第一任务，第二个重要任务就是要做到条理清楚。对于议论文来说，正反面要清楚，对于说明文来说条理要清楚，对于描述文来说，谁干什么要清楚。就拿上例Good health 来说，第一段保持正反面要清楚救应这样写：正面（With good

health ,we can...），反面（Without good health ,we can do nothing.We can’t do...）

为了使文章更具有条理性，我们可以用first(ly)second(ly)third(ly)等副词，他们可以是文章的条例性更加突出。作文是主观题，想得告分就必须引起老师的主意，老师的时间很短（每篇作文只有一两分钟就要阅完），所以我们在列调试最好不用: To be with,...after that ,...And then,...The next ,...The following ,...As last...。因为用这样的词语不利于老师看出你作文的条理性。

四、保证作文符合字数要求的十二句作文法

考生一般都希望作文达到字数而又不至于写得太多，因为写得太多一方面暴露自己语言上的弱点，另一方面又会占用过多的时间。写得太多还易跑题，一个有效的方法就是十二句作文法。

我们知道，四级作文都是三段式。我们算一下，如果我们在每一段中写上四句，即主题句加两三句扩展句和一个结论句就可以了。这样全篇在十二句左右，每一句十多个词，就又120-150个字。大家可以试图找一些作文题练一练。（编辑：赵露

12月大学英语四级考试作文 篇2

This cartoon is silly, and yet compelling: a large customer holds a hopelessly small piece of cloth as the tailor carefully measures. Such an image suggests that one needs to consider practical reality in the pursuance of goals. Merely acting on ones desires, while ignoring the facts at hand, cannot lead to success.

The fact that currently there are more graduates than jobs reminds us of the importance of rational thinking. Every year approximately 3 million students graduate from universities and begin looking for work. Many of them fail to find suitable employment because there are simply not enough opportunities to accommodate such great numbers of graduates. In addition, however, one might also cite flawed individual assessment as a reason.

In order to create a realistic target for ones future, one must make rational decisions and prepare accordingly. A student who aims to be a surgeon, for example, must take care to acquire opportunities to do clinical practice and gain sufficient knowledge. In other words, customers would do well to take accurate measurements before purchasing their fabric. A small piece of cloth cannot adequately clothe a large person.

三必经步骤：大学英语四级考试作文高分技巧 篇3

Directions：For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent? You should write at least 120 words folllowing the outline given below.1.目前不少父母为孩子包办一切

2.为了让孩子独立, 父母应该……

How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent? 父母怎样帮助孩子独立

首先父母应信任自己的孩子，认为他能独立做好他该做的，如果不能，父母也是从旁指点，而不是全权代理，其次在平时生活中培养他独立自主的能力，鼓励他独立完成任务之类的，最后父母的态度很重要，孩子在学习阶段，做不好很正常，父母要正确引导，而不是强加指责

父母提供衣食，却忘记了我们孩子是一个活生生的人！

他们应该教会我们，如何与别人相处，而不是我们自己整天抱着与人交往之类的书籍。。自己琢磨！

他们应该教会我们。如何爱别人。。无论这个人是好，是坏。如何帮助坏人变成好人。而不是让我们模仿他们自己如何的势利。。。在用我们自己势利而无形中伤害了别人。。。他们应该教会我们，如何自食其力。。。如何为自己所做的事负责。。。。而不是一味的让我学习所谓的知识。。而不让我们知道我们自己学这些知识是为了干什么用！

他们应该教会我们如何探寻人生的价值意义。。并且尽自己的努力实现它。。。而不是一味的只要求我们上学，找工作 结婚。。生孩子。。在为了控制孩子而活着。。。

他们应该教会我们如何面对困难而变得坚韧。。变得有勇气正视自己的弱点。。。。而不是在我们不知所措的情况下把我们推向陌生的舞台，在众人面前炫耀什么

他们应该叫我们如何坦露我们自心本来之所想，哪怕在天真，在错误。。在让他们觉得丢人。。。也应该让我们说下去。。然后告诉我们我们到底哪里做的不合时宜。。。下次就改了。。。。而不是恐吓。。。大骂。。。让我们自己变得胆怯。。。。而永生发不出自己内心的声音，而压抑的活一辈子，或是在欺负比我们弱小的人！

父母坚持认为不要给孩子任何可以依赖的幻想，要告诉孩子真相----你不是最优秀的，你不是最好的，这个世界上有比你更强的人，你想要过更好的生活不是错，但你要自己争取，即使身为你的父母，也没有义务为你提供你所要的一切。你有本事，就自己去挣；没有本事，就不要抱怨。养儿不能放老，反成养老防儿。———台湾财务专家郑森源劝人从壮年开始存养老金，要预防临老儿女是“啃老族”或不在身边。范文: How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent?

Today in China, many families have only one child.So the children are usually doted upon by all family members.Gradually some of them get used to depending on their parents and family members, as a result they lack the ability to face their lives by themselves.(dote vi.Dote on/upon, show too much fondness for sb.or sth.热爱、溺爱或宠爱某人或某事物。)

There are some ways to help children to be independent.First, the child should have a chance to see the world around him individually to understand that there are various people and competitions in their lives, and learn to find his right position in the society only by individual efforts.Second, it is impossible to ask a child not to depend on parents at once.The parents may give the child enough help and space to make him feel comfortable.A child needs help from their families.Because without any help, the child may lose his faith.Thirdly, parents can help their children make their own decisions, which can challenge his ability to deal with problems.A child should be praised when he is successful or encouraged when he fails.To be independent is vital for the children, because no parents can go with their children for the whole life.Only an independent person can live and enjoy a full and meaningful life.六级作文：

1.目前高校排名相当盛行

2.对于这种做法，人们看法不一 3.我认为……

It is a not-uncommon social phenomenon that the university rankings are especially prevalent in our country.For example, universities are measured by scale, academic achievements or the number of papers published in famous magazines.As to this issue, opinions vary from person to person.Some people hold that university ranking dramatically promotes the development of university in various fields.But others maintain that university ranking also leads to some undesirable consequences such as academic fraud even to deceive people.As far I am concerned, every coin has two sides.On one hand, University ranking does encourage the development and growth of colleges.Such growth– the grand libraries, splendid stadiums and fruitful academic achievements, has caught the attention of the world.We’re impressed by these signs of our education’s tour to the 21st century.On the other hand, we have to pay attention to an unexpected phenomenon that some people have ignored the objectivity of university ranking.Take South university of science and technology of china for an example, this university occupies the second position in some university rankings.In those rankings, it is superior to Peking University and Tsinghua university.In a word, we should inspire the advantages of university and abandon its disadvantages.My View on University Ranking

In recent years, all kinds of University Ranking Lists can be found on some educational websites, or newspapers.The ranking standards also vary.These lists have great influence on students.They are even becoming the only scale to evaluate the colleges and universities.People hold different views toward this phenomenon.Some believe that these lists help the students a lot, especially for those who will choose their university.While some other protest vigorously.In their points, the list is really ridiculous and harmful.In my view, the university ranking may have its own reference values, but its disadvantages overweigh its values.For those university-students-to-be, they are supposed to choose the school according to his or her own situation, but not the so-called Ranking List.What’s more, how about the university students? How do they feel about themselves when they see the ranking? The list may become some intangible shackles for them if their own school ranks poorly.In a nutshell, there is no easy method to rank these universities, but the Ranking, only helps students ignore the essentials, namely, their ninety-nine percent perspiration.此次六级作文的自由度很大，看似给出了提纲，实际上具体的观点全靠个人发挥。第一段需要点明大学排名这个现象，第二段需要铺陈不同人的观点，第三段要陈述自己的观点。大学排名这个题目，实际上涉及到了对了大学的理解，对于大学排名标准的理解，以及对于大学排名的目的的理解。而这件事更加离不开中国具体的国情，新中国50年代人至今受教育的情况，90后择校的情况，目前大学的情况，考生发挥的空间可以纵横数十年的教育史，并且可以深入探讨教育的本质。

当然，对于大多数考生来说，凑满150个字万岁！那么，模板又可以派上用场了。

四级考试翻译部分：

87．___________________(为了确保他参加会议)，I called him up in advance.解析：In order to ensure him to attend the meeting To ensure his attendance at the meeting

【结构分析】本题句子的主干 “I called him up in advance”已经给出，无需翻译，需要翻译部分为“为了确保他能参加会议”。该部分在句子中作目的状语

【考点解释】本题考查是目的状语。①目的状语可以由to/in order to来引导。②确保 ensure sb to do 确保某人做某事，ensure sth 确保某事

【原句精释】为了确保他参加会议，我已经提前给他电话了。

88．The significant museum________________(据说建成于)about a hundred years ago.解析：is said to have been built

【结构分析】本题句子的主语为the significant museum，缺谓语，即（据说建成于）about a hundred years ago为时间状语。

【考点解释】本题重点考查：①被动语态。主语museum与动词build之间为被动关系;且bulid这一动作发生在过去。②据说 be said to；be said to+ 动词不定式的完成时，表示不定式表示的动作已经完成。

【原句精释】据说这座意义深远的博物馆大约建成于一百年前。

89．There would be no life on earth ____________________(没有地球独特的环境)。解析: without its unique environment but for its unique environment

【结构分析】本题句子含有There be结构。主干完整，there主语，would be 谓语，no life 表语，on earth 地点状语

【考点解释】本题重点考查：①without的用法 without 是介词，后接名词；同时，表示“没有”，除without外，还可用but for；②单词拼写 unique adj.独特；environment n.环境 ③当名词重复出现时，可适当使用代词，避免重复。

【原句精释】没有地球独特的环境，地球上就不会有生命。

90．______________________________(给游客印象最深的)was the friendliness and warmth of the local people.解析：What impressed the tourists most 【结构分析】本题句子为主系表结构，主语即考查部分，was 系动词，剩余部分为表语。

【考点解释】本题重点考查①what引导的主语从句；what可引导句子充当主语；②impress用法 给…留下印象 impress sb；③最高级的用法most；结合考点②③，可推出“给…印象最深”为impress sb most

【原句精释】当地人的友善与热情给游客们留下了最深的印象。

91．They requested that ___________________________(我借的书还回图书馆)by next Friday.解析：books I borrowed(should)be returned to the library I(should)return the book I borrowed to the library

【结构分析】本题句子的主干部分分别是they 主语，request 谓语，后接that引导的宾语从句。