英语四级作文5--note writing

英语四级作文5--note writing（共11篇）

英语四级作文5--note writing 篇1

提出问题类

It is quite natural for ________to ponder over the question of whether to _______________.

Many _________will choose not to______________,generally for three reasons.On the one hand,___________.On the other hand,______________.Most importantly,__________.Nevertheless, oher people adopt a completely different view,thinking that_____________.

Moreover, they further argue that___________.

From what we have discussed above,we can draw the conclusion that the question quite depends on personal choice.In my own eyes,________.

讨论观点类

Different people have different views on_____.Some people think that_____,whereas others aegue that __________.

As far as I am concerned, I agree with the opinion that ___________.For one thing,I firmly believe that ___________.For another,_____________.Just think of________,who/which_______.

Taking all these factors into consideration,we may safely come to the conclusion that______.Only if_______can we _______,just as the saying goes,________________.

分析原因类

_________ is currently becoming a serve problem in China, which happen to ________. So long as ________, ___________ will always unsurprisingly ________.

Why does ________ become so rampant? First and foremost,__________. Secondly,_________. Last but not least, ________. As a consequence,___________.

图表类

According to the chart / graph / diagram / table, we clearly learn that _________. As early as _________,___________. Then,_________. Last,__________. In contrast, by _________,__________.

There are many reasons accounting for _________. Firstly, _________.Secondly,__________. Finally,_________. As a result,_________.

As far as I am concerned,_________. For one thing,__________. For another,________. In brief, I hold that__________.

评论反驳类

Recently it seems that____________.Many people,especially___________,think it will certainly do good to_____________because_____________.Moreover,_________.

Nevertheless,after careful consideration,I have to state that the above view is more than biased,given the following readons.First of all,____________.Besides,__________.Furthermore,__________.

We can see clearly that although_________may bring favorable results,there are still problems concerning_______.It seems necessary for ___________to make a careful consideration befero________.

解决办法类

With the rapid growth of national economy,more and more_________,which causes a serious problem of_________.

Urgent measures are needed to tackle the above-mentioned problem.On the one hand ,_________so that ____________is at hand.On the other hand,_____________.More importantly,____________.

All in all,only when______can we solve the problem of _____________so as to meet everyone’s need .Ultimately,_____________.

英语四级作文5--note writing 篇2

一、了解大学英语教学要求和作文评分标准

《大学英语课程教学要求》指出大学阶段的英语教学要求分为三个层次, 即一般要求、较高要求和更高要求。一般要求是高等学校非英语专业本科毕业生应达到的基本要求, 其中对书面表达能力的要求是:能完成一般性写作任务, 能描述个人经历、观感、情感和发生的事件等, 能写常见的应用文, 能在半小时内就一般性话题或提纲写出不少于120词的短文, 内容基本完整, 中心思想明确, 用词恰当, 语意连贯。能掌握基本的写作技能。了解教学要求后, 考生在备考过程中就会有的放矢。此外, 考生还要熟悉四级作文的评分标准。大学英语四级作文题采用总体评分方法, 即阅卷人员在通读文章后就总体印象给出分数, 具体的评分标准如下:

2分—条理不清、思路紊乱, 语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误, 且多数为严重错误。

5分—基本切题。表达思想不够清楚, 连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。

8分—基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚, 文字勉强连贯;语言错误相当多, 其中有一些是严重错误。

11分—切题。表达思想清楚, 文字连贯, 但有少量语言错误。

14分—切题。表达思想清楚, 文字通顺, 连贯性较好, 基本上无语言错误, 仅有个别小错。

[注:白卷, 作文与题目毫不相关, 或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想, 则给0分]

由此可见, 阅卷老师从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评判。因此, 考生要想在作文部分得高分, 既要保证作文切题, 又要保证用词准确、表达清楚。

二、掌握常用的写作套路

通过分析近五年的11套四级考题, 我们可以总结出作文部分的考查重点。其中, 5套作文题目涉及社会热点问题, 其余6套涉及大学校园生活。体裁主要以议论文为主, 11套题中有9套要求写议论文, 其他两套要求写应用文。因此, 在备考过程中, 考生应该多关注一些社会热点问题, 多阅读相关的评论报道, 以便为考试积累大量素材;而且, 多考虑一些同自己学习生活息息相关的话题, 只有这样才能在考试写作过程中做到有话可说, 写出内容充实的文章。此外, 掌握不同体裁作文的写作模式也是非常重要的。下文将结合近五年的四级作文题目, 重点介绍一下几种议论文的写作套路。

(一) 对比选择型

对比选择型议论文的立意在于对事物“利”与“弊”的分析。这类作文通常是对一个观点或事物的正反两方面或者两个不同的观点或事物进行对比, 从而引出主题, 得出结论。这种作文可以采用如下写作模式。第一段:简单提及现象或事物, 并阐述该现象或事物的甲方观点;第二段:阐述乙方不同观点;第三段:通过甲、乙两种观点或事物的对比得出结论, 或提出自己的观点。2006年12月的四级作文题目“On the Spring Festival Gala”, 就可采用上面这种写作模式。首先, 考生应该阐述甲方观点 (喜欢看春节晚会) ;然后, 指出乙方观点 (取消春节晚会) , 并简要说明他们的理由;最后, 考生应该表明自己的观点, 并提出建议。然而, 2008年6月的作文题目是“Recreational Activities”, 要求考生阐述娱乐活动的利与弊, 并提出自己看法。显然, 这篇对比选择型作文就应该采用不同的写作模式。即:第一段简单介绍现象或事物 (采用例证方法说明娱乐活动多种多样) ;第二段分析该现象或事物的好处和不利之处 (娱乐活动可能使人受益, 也可能有危害性) ;第三段通过对一种观点或事物的利弊分析得出结论, 或提出自己的看法。

(二) 问题对策型

2009年6月的“Free Admission to Museums”、12月的“Create a Green Campus”和2010年12月的“How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independnet?”都属于问题对策型的议论文。这种作文的立意在“how”, 以“方法”“途径”“怎么样”为短文的核心, 是重点落笔之处。这类题目通常先说明情况, 提出问题, 随后提出解决办法, 最后给予评价。具体的写作模式是第一段描述现状、形式、困难, 提出问题;第二段提出解决问题的方法, 是重点段;第三段简单评价提及的方法。例如, 针对2010年12月的作文题目, 考生应该先采用例证法描述一下目前不少父母为孩子包办一切, 指出这一现象所产生的严重后果, 进而提出应该培养孩子独立能力这一问题;然后, 考生重点阐述父母应该如何做才能帮助孩子独立, 可提两三种方法并简单扩展;最后, 简单评价、总结一下。

(三) 原因阐释型

原因阐释型作文的立意在于“why”, 以探究产生某一社会现象或问题的原因或理由为短文主体。这类题目通常先描述某一社会现象或问题现状, 然后阐释产生这一现象的原因, 最后对此做出评述或提出解决思路。具体的写作流程是第一段对某一社会现象或问题现状进行描述;第二段阐释产生这一社会现象的深层次原因;第三段针对该现象发表个人看法或提出解决思路。最近五年的考题中, 2007年12月的“What Electives to Choose”、2010年6月的“Due Attention Should Be Given to Spelling”都可归为原因阐释型议论文。例如, 考生答2010年6月的作文题时, 首先指出如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写这一现象非常普遍, 可举例稍微加以扩展;然后, 重点分析出现这种现象的具体原因, 一般给出2-3个原因;最后, 结合原因, 对症下药, 提出改变这种状况的措施。

(四) 现象阐述型

现象阐述型作文主要阐述某一现象或观点。这类题目通常先指明一种现象或提出一种观点, 然后对这一现象或观点进行阐述, 最后得出结论或发表个人见解。这种作文的写作流程是第一段为概述, 简要描述某一现象或观点;第二段为具体阐述, 详细阐述现象或观点的正确性或危害性等;第三段为个人见解, 重申观点或表明自己的态度、看法。此类作文题目只在2008年12月的四级考题中出现过一次, 要求考生论述一次性塑料袋的使用和限用问题。撰写这篇作文时, 考生应该先概述一次性塑料袋广为使用这一现象;然后, 阐述这一现象的危害性, 即广泛使用一次性塑料袋所产生的2-3个问题;最后, 提出限制使用一次性塑料袋的意义。

(五) 例证阐发型

例证阐发型文章的主要写作手段是运用举例法。举例是最有效的说明和论证手段, 通过举例说明和论证可以化抽象为具体, 复杂为简易, 增强读者的阅读兴趣, 提高文章的说服力。举例应典型充分、切中主题、具体生动、安排恰当。例证阐发型作文的写作流程是:第一段解释谚语、成语等所蕴涵的道理并点明主题或直接点明主题;第二段运用实例阐述主题;第三段重申主题, 呼应开头。这种类型的作文题目未在近五年的四级考题中出现。

三、提高英语语言表达能力

文章的内容和语言是一个统一体, 作文应该表达题目所规定的内容, 而内容要通过语言来表达。要想写出高分作文, 考生除了掌握常用的写作模式, 还要提高自己的英语表达能力, 将内容清楚准确地表达出来。

(一) 背诵、模仿经典范文

在教学过程中, 笔者要求学生背诵所学课文的经典段落以及其他经典美文。一年之后, 学生的英语表达能力有了很大提高。因此, 考生应在平时多背诵一些高分作文或其他经典范文。注意积累地道的词、词组和句型结构, 并经常模仿使用, 将其内化为自己的知识。只有这样, 考生才能在考试过程中熟练运用所记的表达方式。

(二) 多写多练, 熟能生巧

英语四级作文写作技巧 篇3

自2007年6月起，英语新四级考试在全国范围内展开。第一部分是写作，测试学生用英语进行书面表达的能力，所占分值比例为15%，求考生根据规定的题目和提供的提纲、情景、或图表等在30分钟内写完至少120个单词的文章。出题的方式和涉及的话题越来越与学生的真实生活接近，越来越强调实用性，而且常常和当时社会发生的事情联系在一起。写作要求是：思想表达准确，意义连贯，无严重语法错误。

2.四级作文写作技巧

A.审题布局，理清结构

拿到作文考题，先要仔细分析作文题目，不是直接开写。要写出一篇相对成功的文章，要树立一个框架意识，各段的安排必须合理，否则即使语言运用得再好，也很难得高分。一般来说，四级作文都是由三个段落组成，有时也可以是四段，其结构和内容必须根据文章主题和提纲中给出的段落提示来确定，不能随意安排。以2012年6月的作文为例：

Directions： For this part， you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On Excessive Packaging following the outline given below. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

目前许多商品存在过度包装的现象，出现这一现象的原因，我对这一现象的看法和建议。

分析标题和提纲可知，本文应该是说明与议论相结合。根据提纲，写作时指出目前许多商品存在过度包装的现象，并说明该现象的典型表现；然后分析出现这一现象的原因；最后发表我对这一现象的看法和建议。

据此，文章分为三段，开头段交待全文主题：目前许多商品存在过度包装现象；中间段围绕出现这一现象的原因进行论述；结尾段提出我对这一现象的看法和建议。这三部分缺一不可。这样段落层次分明，构架清晰合理，要完成一篇文章结构完整的四级作文便不难了。

此外，每个段落的结构也要求具有完整性。一个段落必须有若干个扩展句，使主题思想得到充分展开。如果只有主题句而没有扩展句来进一步说明和阐述主题，就不能构成一个完整的段落。

全篇各个段落都要为一个中心思想服务，而且每个段落都要围绕一个主题句来展开，如果有游离于中心思想之外的段落或句子则会使文章零散杂乱。另外，句子的结构杂乱也会造成段落松散，从而导致文章主题不明确，令读者不知所云。

B.突出主题、句式多变

长句短句错落有致。真正优秀的文章应做到长短句搭配合理，难简结合，平实中见功力。很多考生缺乏写作训练，往往在作文中忽视运用长句或是长句运用不当，因此在平时训练时，考生就应该有意识地在每段中都设置出1至2个有特色的长句，如并列句、排比句、主从复合句等，使文章错落有致、行文流畅并体现出语言功底。

主动被动合理运用。按照汉语的写作思维，我们习惯于表现动作的执行者，但当把我们这种思维应用于英语写作时，就会出现一个明显的缺陷，因为英语的native speakers在写作过程中更注重表现事情本身，所以在他们的文章里，使用被动语态或者不体现动作执行者的句子更多一些。当然，在写作过程中，并不是要一味地追求被动语态的使用，在什么情

况下用主动，什么情况下用被动，这与陈述对象有密切的关系，英语写作中强调叙述对象的一致性，所以在实际写作中，一定要合理运用主动和被动。

倒装、强调适当穿插。强调句式是一种突出重点的有效旬式。另外，倒装句式也常用于达到强调的目的。因此，在写作中适当穿插使用强调句和倒装句，不仅可以突出强调重点部分，而且能够丰富句式，起到修饰作用，达到意想不到的表达效果。

比较结构巧妙使用。比较结构是英语中使用频率较高的一种句式，如果能够恰当地运用，可以使语言表达更加地道，对各种类型作文的写作都大有裨益。

句与句间衔接紧密。英语中十分重视句与句之间的形合，在写作中即使上下旬之间的意义联系紧密，逻辑关系很明显，也不能省略连接词或过渡词，否则就不符合英语的思维与表达习惯。恰当地使用连接词，尤其是表示从属关系的连接词（如who，Which，that，because，since，although，if，unless，as等），不仅能丰富句型，而且能将意思表达得更加清楚，使句与句之间衔接更加紧密，意义更加连贯。

C.出现亮点

遣词用语准确地道。词语的选用直接关系到句子的优劣，也势必关系到段落主体思想的表达，进而关系到整篇文章的质量，所以“把恰当的词用到恰当的地方”成为写作的至理名言。在写作中选择准确的词汇、使用地道的语言，不仅可以使文章的表达更加到位，更重要的是能起到“点睛”的作用，成为作文获得高分的亮点之一。

开头结尾突破常规。文章开头段除了要表明主题外，还有一个重要的任务就是要引起读者的兴趣，使文章具有与众不同的吸引力。四级写作阅卷往往是根据第一段确定文章的分数档次，如果能在开头就表现出不同凡响的语句，对于提高整个文章的分数档次会有很大的作用。

另外，文章的结尾也同样不容忽视。结尾篇幅虽然不宜过长，但却也是决定文章成败的点睛之笔，因此可以有意识地采取某种突破常规的写作手法，让考官在读到结尾时能眼睛一亮。

适当应用修辞手法。准确恰当地使用修辞手法，会极大地增强文章的表现力，使文章更加生动形象、意蕴丰富并且引人人胜。英文写作中常见的修辞手法有比喻、平行结构、修辞问句等。

恰当使用警句格言。一篇好的作文在有了合理的结构和布局之外，如果能有一定的文采，会锦上添花，而体现文采的一个重要手段就是恰当地使用警句格言。

【例】 As an old Chinese saying goes，traveling ten thousand miles and reading ten thousand books is the top ideal for people. Travel does broaden our mind. It enables us to appreciate beautiful scenery，value the culture and customs of the country visited and learn its history.

3.结语

英语四级作文5--note writing 篇4

From my perspective, under no circumstances should we undervalue the power of doing small things.Instead, we should regard small things as the source of experience, skills and the prerequisite of success.“Great achievement only belongs to those who can do small things perfectly.” Aristotle once said.The Impact of the Internet on the Way People Communicate

Being a product of high-technology, Internet and computers are being more and more widely used in our everyday life.They can offer us fast and convenient service for communication.In recent years, computers and the Internet have become popular among university students.Quite a lot of them use them at school to keep in touch with their families and friends instead of going home to see them in person or writing letters.Which, of course brings conveniences to them, but I don’t think it is good to do

so.Internet

makes

electronic communication convenient, but it will never replace face to face contact.Both electronic communication and face-to-face contact are important in our life.What we should do it to apply each communication ways in the right way.Technology development enables us to communication with parents and friend in a brand new and fast way, but it is face-to face contact that deepens the feelings and emotions between people.范文二：

Due to the wide use of computers and the development of Internet, more and more people like to chat on the Internet.We tend to pay more attention to electronic communication than to face-to-face contact.As electronic communication is not limited by space, we can chat with others where there is Internet with our tools such as computers, mobile phones and pads.However, when we chat with others online, we cannot express our feelings fully.Just as the picture shows, the parents cannot touch or hug their child.We know that body language plays an important role in our communication, but the electronic communication cannot do this.For example, when we are sad, we need more love and warmth, a real hug from our parents or friends can mean much more to us than just words through electronic communication.范文三：

The Impact of the Mobile Phone in People’s Life

The thought-provoking drawing mirrors a common phenomenon in contemporary society that there is the negative influence of mobile phone.As is subtly shown in the picture，so many people are too much addicted to cell phones that they use walking sticks to see the road.What a meaningful cartoon!

It is to me that indulging in mobile phones produces native influences on body and mind.First and foremost, overusing mobile phones is detrimental to physical health for watching mobiles for a long stretch definitely impairs one’s eyesight.Suppose that a man is addicted in cell phones in whatever situation, it will be very disadvantageous for him to concentrate on his work, learning, or daily life and is very likely to hurt him.Furthermore, overusing cell phones adversely affects state of mind.An addict may stay inside his bubble instead of pursuing other endeavors, which eventually prevents the growth of think skills.It is high time that we took effective measures to curb this trend.I cherish a belief that cell phones themselves are not good or bad and we can benefit a lot from it as long as we take a good control over them.Therefore, though electronic communication brings convenience to our life, I still don’t think the electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact.范文四：

The impact of the Internet on the way people communicate

As to this picture above, an interesting dialogue happens between the parents and their child on the Internet.The parents, sitting in front of a computer, say “...we look forward to seeing you again the next time your computer crashes...” Funny as it shows, which naturally leads us to be associated with the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate.It is no dout that face-to-face contact is inevitably impaired by electronic communication in the era of Internet.Some suggest that the net brings about changes in interpersonal communication.With the net, we could contact people to share a great deal of information from anywhere at anytime.What’s more, we could learn a large amount of knowledge from different persons on such an opening flat.However, others insist that the internet has a bad influence on interpersonal communication.Even worse, some people are addicted to surfing the net so much as to isolate themselves from their families and friends, which is not beneficial to further interpersonal relationship and promote the feeling of harmony.From my point of view, every coin has two sides.When we enjoy the benefit that the net brings us, we need to realize that the virtual net could never take place of the face-to-face communication among human beings.After all, we all live in a real world.Therefore, it is advisable for us to have a more face to face communication with our families, friends and acquaintances in real life instead of merely through the Internet.As can

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英语四级作文5--note writing 篇5

A winebibber,when he has wine addiction,that he is going to the bar and drink some cups of wine.

He will goes to the bar every day before he going to work.Its a snowy morning.He goes to bar before he going to work again.He fells there is somebody follows him on his way to his office.He turns his head and he see his son is treading his footmark.His son is following him.

His son is excited and says:Dad! Look,I am treading your footmark!The man is very surprise that his son shocks to him. He thinks:I will go to the bar, but my son is following me!

英语四级作文5--note writing 篇6

I will leave …University as a graduate in Education Department in Aug. 20xx. Now I am waiting for employment to pursue the calling to be a teacher at school. I happened to have learned that you were now recruiting recently. In answer to it for one of the new teachers, I beg to offer myself as a candidate for the post. My qualifications are as follows:

I am at the age of ….I was born in a teacher family, so I have been eager to be a qualified teacher as my father and mother since I was very young. Devoting myself assiduously and faithfully to the duty of the profession, I enthusiastically registered myself for the normal university after I had left senior high school. During studying at college, I worked hard to prepare what would be need in the future career. Because I liked to go into the whys and wherefores of anything of my major subjects, I gained outstanding academic achievements (see also my vita).

If these meet your requirement, please grant me an interview.

Thanking you in advance for your early reply.

Yours obediently,

英语四级作文5--note writing 篇7

1.目前越来越多的家长给孩子配手机，目的是…

2.也会带来_些问题

3.你的看法

【范文】

giving children cell phones

英语四级作文 篇8

I am here writing this letter to express my gratitude to you for what you did for me. There is no denying in saying that without your assistance, I would not have been able to overcome this difficulty.

My mother had been suffering from coronary heart disease and was badly in need of a surgery a week ago. As the only son in my family, I am obliged to shoulder the responsibility to support my mother mentally and materially.

Disappointedly, I had no much money at hand. Once hearing the unfortunate news, you, without any hesitation, lent me 15,000 Yuan, guaranteeing my mother’s operation to be carried out in time.

Just as the old saying goes, the misfortune tests the sincerity of friends. Please accept my most cordial thanks for your timely help which will be engraved in my thankful mind. And an ordinary “thanks” would not suffice to convey my gratitude to you. And I will return the money as soon as possible.

Sincerely yours,

Kevin

范文二：

Dear Jack,

I am writing to express my heartfelt gratitude for the continuous assistance you and your family have offered to me these years.

Firstly, your continuous help have made me a splendid academic achievement in my study career. Secondly, your family are fridendly and make me feel at home when everytime I visit you. Thirdly, the Chinese food you have brought me is dilicious and I enjoy it so much. At last, I miss the Christmas night with you forever.

In a word, my appreciation to you is beyond words. Besides, It is really an honor for me to be your friend and I will cherish the goodwill you have showed to me wherever I go. In the coming year, I hope that you and your family would come and visit America one day.

Sincerely yours,

英语四级作文 篇9

Charity is of utmost importance to us humans. While following a spate of scandals, some individuals and institutions involved in this field have encountered criticism in recent months.

There are several reasons for this phenomenon. Above all, compared with those of developed countries, the charity awareness in our country is backward. Some people equal charity with donation, and therefore they believe that charity is the rich’s responsibility and has nothing to do with the middle-class and the poor. The second thing that must be taken into consideration is that a number of individuals and charitable organizations lack a sense of social responsibility, which results in the declining social credibility.

For my part, I believe the following steps can address this situation. Firstly, people’s awareness of how profound influence charity can bring to our society should be heightened. Secondly, rigorous supervision must be carried out by the administrations involved, so that the charity activities will become more transparent.

英语作文句子：英语作文经典句子 篇10

2、Not until he came back from abroad was I able to see him again.

3、The harder you work， the greater progress you will make.

4、He walked around the house， gun in hand.

5、May you be in good health!

6、Wish you a pleasant journey back home!

7、The professor was a humorous man with big nose and deep-set eyes.

8、What surprised me most was his imagination and patience.

9、He lay on the grass， with his eyes looking at the sky and his hands under his head.

英语四级作文真题 篇11

审题谋篇

本次四级作文主题为“绿色校园”，这是一个看似简单普通的话题，写起来却不是那么容易。因为很多考生对于“绿色校园”所表达的内涵感觉比较生僻。假如对“绿色校园”这一主题感到难以把握，考生可以从作文提纲入手进行分析以获取对“绿色校园”这一概念的相关信息。根据作文提示2，可以看出此处的“绿色校园”指的决不仅仅是青青的草地和高大的树木构成的校园绿色风景，也不仅仅指对校园环境的珍视和爱护，而是指一种环境保护的文化氛围和师生具有的环境素养，以及由此带来的和谐的人文环境和社会绩效。在深入理解概念的基础上，考生还应对 “绿色校园”的重要性进行剖析，这时，考生可以从多个角度组织素材，比如从校园的环境问题出发，进而扩展到师生的环境意识对“绿色校园”所产生的长远意义以及为未来环境改善所做的贡献。最后是阐述建设“绿色校园”所要采取的措施。需要注意的就是作文给分的重点在于考生如何用恰当的语言词汇表达自己的思想观点。而不是写得越多，得分就越高。一般分成三个自然段，大概十句话，基本的分布为首段、末段合起来五句或六句，中间段五句或四句，做到结构清楚，重点突出，就可以了。参考范文

Creating a Green Campus

Recently, with the idea of making and maintaining “a green earth” being the focus of the society, “green campus” has become a more and more popular concept in universities or colleges, which, undoubtedly, will bring us an ever-lasting benefit to both our campus and our society.The concept of “green campus” does not only mean a green environment but also refers to an environmental sense in people’s mind.Campus plays a crucial role in educating the young generation and the consciousness of “green campus” will definitely produce a profound effect on students’ various environmental protection activities after their graduation.What’s more, the young generation is under the burden of severe environmental pollution and there are many problems waiting for them to solve.To make “green campus” come true, firstly, it is necessary to work out effective principles for the development of sustainable and recyclable campus.Secondly, it calls for people’s awareness of the serious pollution around us and actual action to reduce the waste.Last but not least, it is necessary to strengthen the ties between campus and society, so as to ensure that “green campus” can work smoothly with the co-effort of the whole society.建设绿色校园

近来，随着建设并保持“绿色地球”的观念成为社会关注的焦点，“绿色校园”也成为校园里流行的话题。这无疑会给我们的校园和社会带来长远的利益。

“绿色校园”不仅仅指绿色的环境，还包括人们头脑中的环境意识。学校在培养年轻一代上起着关键作用，“绿色校园”的意识必定会对学生毕业后的环境保护意识产生长远影响。更为重要的是，年轻一代面临着严重的环境污染，有太多问题等待他们去解决。

为使“绿色校园”成为现实，首先应该制定出可持续发展、可长远发展的有效政策。其次，还需要人们对环境污染的严肃性有正确认识并采取实际行动切实减少污染。最后但同样重要的是，有必要加强学校和社会的联系以便在全社会共同努力下使“绿色校园”顺利实施。范文点评

范文以“绿色校园”开篇，保证了文章切题。第一段开门见山，强调当今环保理念下构建“绿色校园”的长远意义。第二段，着重讨论“绿色校园”的含义，指出“绿色校园”不仅指校园中的绿化，还指生活在校园中的人们的绿色和环保意识，把校园这个小环境和社会这个大环境结合起来，说理更加深刻。第三段是谈及具体的做法，分一、二、三点进行论述，无疑是使“绿色校园”的理念落在实处。结构完整，首尾呼应，用词准确。关系词的正确使用让句与句之间、段与段之间衔接紧凑，思想表达成熟有深度。

【生动的用词】 maintain保持;concept概念;profound长远的;sustainable可持续的;recyclable可循环的。

【丰富的短语】bring benefit to带来利益;play a crucial role in发挥关键作用;under the burden of在„„重负下;come true实现;call for要求。

【多变的句式】

范文中长句、短句、简单句、复杂句交叉使用。不同句型之间的转换，能让阅卷老师更好地了解考生对句子结构的掌握运用，从而获得高分。

避错指导

本次作文在题材上，虽然仍然延续了我们所熟悉校园类话题，但与社会背景有很大关系。刚刚闭幕的哥本哈根世界气候大会使环保减排这个主题成为焦点，在全世界都提倡可持续发展、和谐发展这一背景下的“绿色校园”，同时也是一个社会热点话题，这是我们审题时所必须考虑的。另外开篇时，切忌拖泥带水，应直截了当，使阅卷老师对文章主题一目了然。除正确审题之外，考生还应注意语言的准确运用，不落俗套。不同句型之间转换时，考生应对句子结构全面掌握，避免句式错误造成扣分。

最后，应尽量避免单词拼写错误。本次作文常见的卷面拼写错误如下表：

正确拼写 词性及词义 错误的拼写

focus n.焦点 focuse

effect n.影响 effection /affect

environment n.环境 envirment/invironment

burden n.负担 burdon solve v.解决 slove serious a.严肃的 serous true a.真的 ture

society n.社会 soceity

theory n.理论 thery

总之，考生在构思和写作过程中要尽可能做到思路完整，恰如其分地选择词汇。毕竟，无错表达才是四级语言表达合格的核心。

能力拓展

【同义词转换】

作文表达除了准确，还要做到句式多变，词汇灵活多样。

1.realize → be aware of 意识到

We’d better be aware of the seriousness of pollution around us.我们最好意识到周围污染的严峻性。

2.keep → preserve 保持

It is necessary to educate the students to be conscious of the importance to preserve the environment.有必要教育学生意识到保护环境的重要性。

3.lead → conduct 引导

This will help conduct the activities of the college students.这有助于引导大学生的行为。

【话题备考锦囊】

6.The idea of “a green campus” is beyond a green environment.“绿色校园”绝不仅仅是一个绿色环境。

7.The construction of “a green campus” will greatly stimulate students to take part in

various environmental protection activities.建设“绿色校园”将会极大激励学生参与环境保护。

8.To bring “a green campus” to its full play, effective measures should be taken.为全面实施“绿色校园”，必须采取有效措施。

9.Campus construction is of vital importance not only to the physical development of students but to their mental health as well.校园建设不仅对学生的身体发展很重要，而且对他们的心理健康也很重要。

10.There is little doubt that further consideration must be paid to our green campus.毫无疑问，对于绿色校园应该给与更多的思考。

【话题词汇拓展】

devastation n.毁坏disastrous a.损失惨重的doom v.厄运，毁灭existence n.存在，生活

healthful a.健康的messy a.肮脏的，凌乱的participation n.分享，参与preserve v.保存，保护

preventive a.预防性的purify v.澄清，净化

stimulation n.激励，鼓舞arouse consciousness 唤起意识

命题风向标

本次作文难度适中，与之前考试中出现的“限塑”主题有千丝万缕的联系。考生要想在本次作文中获取高分，除了审题恰当独到，还要有扎实的语言基础。如本文主题“绿色校园”可以采用多种表达：green campus和environmental-friendly campus;“绿色校园的构建”可以使用create，build up，establish和construct等，以体现考生对词汇多样性的积累。